Well here it is

Discussion in 'General' started by paperclip, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. paperclip

    paperclip D'oh!

    Here is the poem I said I would write, Lemme know what you think.


    "Godspeed"

    Early in the morning, whether it shines or rains
    Gets up forgetting his aches and pains
    Full armor bearing, expectations are high
    He gets on the saddle, he’s ready to fight.

    When he sees the green flag, his engine will roar
    With a chill of excitement, that he soon will ignore
    Up and down the hills, down the straight or the kink
    He focuses hard, he won’t even blink.

    He has to push hard, he has to go faster
    He pushes his limits, to become the master
    They say that he’s crazy, he may be indeed
    But is just that our hero, if from a rare breed.

    His memory and honor will remain among
    Among those who met him, among those who he loved
    Fair winds to our hero, and following seas
    Have a good journey, Godspeed.
     
  2. WERA74

    WERA74 Poser and proud of it!

    Wow, pretty impressive. You go, Boriqua!
     
  3. paperclip

    paperclip D'oh!

    Thank you very much. Is funny though, 148 views and only one reply. :confused: What does everybody else think about it??
     
  4. CnrCrvr

    CnrCrvr Guest

    Great job! My girlfriend printed it out and attached it to a pick of me on the track and had it framed and hung above my desk when I returned home from Jennings last night. Good stuff man.
     
  5. UGA Dawg

    UGA Dawg Fertile Member

    This touched my heart pretty heavy and it took me a bit to reply. We have seen that word "Godspeed" far too much the last two years and this brought back the "good" meaning of it for me. Thanks Clip!:)
     
  6. RZ Racer

    RZ Racer It passed tech LAST time!

    Well done!
     
  7. Lever

    Lever Well-Known Member

    :clap: (they don't have a smilee who snaps his fingers):D
     
  8. ToddClark

    ToddClark f'n know it all

    Clip, if you dont mind, i'd like to print that up, put it on the back of a poster i have of Trent Dailey (rider killed at Tally in August), and then give it to his wife and little girls. *sigh*

    Great poem dude.... :)
     
  9. RichardLesher

    RichardLesher Well-Known Member

    hey, I have one too.

    Macho men jest at me
    Please my lady dance with me

    For men with lust from dawn to dusk
    Fear where I tread where octane bread

    For not a touch for this or that
    can best the place where bugs go splat

    On visor’s helms where insects rest
    I assure you dear the place is best

    No woman’s lips can tempt this heart
    to leave behind the track for tart

    Before you smile, before you touch
    before you even think as much

    Before you lift you head to me
    before you think to speak to me

    Before you ask who’s blow job’s best
    I seek the place where insects rest

    Find my helm find my gloves
    I seek the place I truly love

    I see you brew a hating stew,
    wait my dear I’m not done with you

    Before you leave me from your grace,
    here’s a rag, clean your face.
     
  10. paperclip

    paperclip D'oh!

    Sure no problem, that's the idea!
     
  11. paperclip

    paperclip D'oh!

    There has been a pen change, on line 12, it now reads:

    But one thing is certain, he's from a rare breed.

    If you have already printed it out I appologize, it had to be done. I have the updated vervion at my website, plus it will be posted at poetry.com soon.
     
  12. gixxerjosh

    gixxerjosh Captain America's Flunky

    Re: Re: Well here it is

    Very inspiring, I must say. You did a good job!!
     
  13. 3rddegr6

    3rddegr6 Well-Known Member

    Very Nice. :up:
     

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